Studying and entertainment

My friend is doremon.He always wants to know more knowledge.He usually sits on the class while almost boy in my class go out to play.With him, nothing is more important than studying, so he made a forum for studying.But there aren't many people participate in his forum.He asks himself:" Why is studying forum borer than entertaiment forum ? Why don't people like studying but like playing ?". He hasn't got the question for a long time.Although I'm not clever , I think I have the question which he want...


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Of course, I had the answer. Whatever, Studying is an important part of our life, It always exist and is indispensable in everyone.
if you don't study, You can not go to university or will not do your work easily. If you don't study, allthing become be difficult. OK.
You say " Entertainment is of course" I agree but you must study before, after you can play because if you play but don't learn knowledge, I will not be winner, you will lose.
Finally, studying and entertainment are always together.

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We are only student at high school now.Beside 4h30min- the main class time in class, almost students have got tutoring lessons of math, physics, chemistry, english,.....on the everning in almost days of week.Someone has got lessons on the night at teacher' house.So everyone is tired of studying. And at that, they need entertainment, they need to be entertained,Therefore, they visit and participate on entertainment forum instead of studying forum.

We are only student at high school now. In the class, when our teacher are teaching, we talk. In the free between lessons, we play with our friends, we laugh very much, we feel happy. Besides, there are many afternoons, we don't must study, we can be at home to play many things as: online on the Internet, play computer games, chat ....
Or, if we must study in the afternoon, there are many people who are games store (?) to play World of Warcraft or Haftlife, and so on. In the evening, many students say to their parents that " I go to teacher's house to study". But you can see them in the games store ??? So everyone plays very much (all day). And at that, they need to study many things which they don't listen their teacher or study other knowledge. OK. Therefore, they should visit and participate on studying forum instead of entertainment forum. Bye.
(In this text, I sure that there are many mistakes and use simple present tense in all)